LOOK HERE!! ..if you want me

[!!harry]

Hi guys!!
I'm !!harry and here you can listen to my dance song "if you want me". Check it out!!
YouTube - ..if you want me..theharrysound

[needlefingers]

Congratulations! I think it has possibilities.

I do like the lyrics, the music, the girl's voice, and the song as a whole.

I don't know if you are looking for a critique..... or maybe you did this as a demo.

The music has the sound of Around The World(La La La La La) by ATC. To me that is a plus, as that song did go around the world, not to mention the commercials it spawned. It may be a little dated for sound, but I am going by American ears.

One suggestion you might consider; when you do filter sweeps, raise/lower the volume opposite of what the sweep is doing. This is to keep it leveled with the beat track.

Also, I don't know if it is your vocal on the track, but it needs some more processing (i.e. reverb, EQ, compression.....etc.). As it is, it is sitting on top of the music, instead of blending in with it.

When the bridge "everytime you look at me..." is sung, it is better. You added efx to the voice.

But when the other lyrics fall into that syncopated fast speak, it is lost. I can understand that the same efx cannot be used on the faster parts, but the voice, by itself, is coming off flat. And I mean flat as in "boring" or "disconnected"; not flat as in "off-pitch".

Still, I like it. Is that your picture in the end? Go for it "baby".

[!!harry]

hi!!
thanks for your comment...I'm very happy beacuse you givme some advices to improve the song..
I did as a demo.. the sound is not better but I did all with trial music programs and it's my first time and I have to say that I've never used before all this programmes!!
really really thanks for your comment again!! :)

!!harry